The rays have become irresponsible
they sparkle with a more subtle shine
the colour becomes darker, seductive
as they spread across the evening skyline
waiting for the stars to dance
How extraordinary - that these words just flow: irresponsible, subtle, seductive, dance. Completely sensual picture of the sky. You make me wish to be a poetry reviewer and not just your admiring mother-fan!
How extraordinary - that these words just flow: irresponsible, subtle, seductive, dance. Completely sensual picture of the sky. You make me wish to be a poetry reviewer and not just your admiring mother-fan!
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